# HG changeset patch # User Tom Henderson # Date 1424723491 28800 # Node ID 243001f59f6691fc2a9fb6fde8564027a399d5f4 # Parent 018b26ee77e769d1e74b25ec5323157c9c249604 fix tutorial typos (found by Renan) diff -r 018b26ee77e7 -r 243001f59f66 doc/tutorial/source/building-topologies.rst --- a/doc/tutorial/source/building-topologies.rst Mon Feb 23 12:25:34 2015 -0800 +++ b/doc/tutorial/source/building-topologies.rst Mon Feb 23 12:31:31 2015 -0800 @@ -24,7 +24,7 @@ this section. The appearance and operation of these helpers should look quite familiar to you. -We provide an example script in our examples/tutorial} directory. This script +We provide an example script in our ``examples/tutorial`` directory. This script builds on the ``first.cc`` script and adds a CSMA network to the point-to-point simulation we've already considered. Go ahead and open ``examples/tutorial/second.cc`` in your favorite editor. You will have already seen @@ -524,7 +524,7 @@ $ tcpdump -nn -tt -r second-0-0.pcap -and see that the echoed packet arrives back at the source at 2.007602 seconds, +and see that the echoed packet arrives back at the source at 2.017607 seconds, .. sourcecode:: text @@ -884,7 +884,7 @@ Next, we see an old friend. We instantiate a ``PointToPointHelper`` and set the associated default ``Attributes`` so that we create a five megabit per second transmitter on devices created using the helper and a two millisecond -delay on channels created by the helper. We then ``Intall`` the devices +delay on channels created by the helper. We then ``Install`` the devices on the nodes and the channel between them. :: @@ -1261,7 +1261,7 @@ packets in this trace. We leave it as an exercise to completely parse the trace dump. -Now, look at the pcap file of the right side of the point-to-point link, +Now, look at the pcap file of the left side of the point-to-point link, .. sourcecode:: bash diff -r 018b26ee77e7 -r 243001f59f66 doc/tutorial/source/conceptual-overview.rst --- a/doc/tutorial/source/conceptual-overview.rst Mon Feb 23 12:25:34 2015 -0800 +++ b/doc/tutorial/source/conceptual-overview.rst Mon Feb 23 12:31:31 2015 -0800 @@ -92,7 +92,7 @@ Net Device ++++++++++ -It used to be the case that if you wanted to connect a computers to a network, +It used to be the case that if you wanted to connect a computer to a network, you had to buy a specific kind of network cable and a hardware device called (in PC terminology) a *peripheral card* that needed to be installed in your computer. If the peripheral card implemented some networking function,